Time for some revisions and planning?

I tried to write a little more on that last post and I realized that I’m not totally sure what’s going on with the story. I’ve lost touch with it, I don’t know or remember what’s going on or who the characters are. I think it’s time to take a moment to revise and reconnect with it, then plan out what’s going to happen next before I bother writing more. This week is going to be SOOO busy for me, for a million different reasons. I might even try my hand at NaNoWriMo. I know that I utterly failed at the summer version of it but to be honest, as busy as November will be, it’s at least a lot more structured than the summer was. Maybe I’ll get more written than last time anyway (I think I stopped at just over 5,000 words?) My point is, expect the story to continue, or a completely different story to start, sometime after November ends?


Ch 3; pg 3

“Ah,” He smiled wide, “the new recruits!”

“This is Mr. Brownstone, head of this department.” Eileen whispered.

“Kids, do you know why the company name is Halberd Industries?” he asked rhetorically.

Within his contrived, ‘thoughtful’ pause Mellvin interjected to Mr. Brownstone’s dismay, “Isn’t that the last name of the founders of the company?” Continue reading

Ch3; pg2

Inside the elevator there were only three buttons. One for the floor they had just toured, one that Eileen pressed and one below that which was left unexplained. The doors opened in time with the cheerful ping that indicated they had reached their destination. Eileen promptly stepped off the elevator and began walking right into the heart of what seemed to be a labyrinth of hallways. The other two followed quickly but silently behind making every other step a small jump in an effort to catch up while attempting to keep their pace at a walk. Eileen suddenly stopped and turned to them at the convergence of the hallways. Continue reading

Remember me?

UPDATE: Hey, remember that one time when I said I was going to start writing more and then it didn’t happen for a few weeks? Well this time I am in the process of writing a new post which will go up as soon as it’s done so it’s impossible for me to lie this time!


Soooo, I’ve been pretty missing for a little bit. First I moved out of my summer apartment, then I went to Maine, then I had a dentist appt all the way back home and now FINALLY I’m back at school. Hooray! Tomorrow marks the first day of a short time period with some regularity and so I’ll once again be writing, at least a little bit, every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. So internet, in case you are paying attention, I will be posting again. That is all.

Chapter 3: The Halberd Offices

“This is where all the clerical work is done. ¬†We have thousands of orders coming in daily from all over the country. Our staff uses the latest in Halberd technology, often performing daily tasks on equipment that the consumer has not yet even heard of!” Eileen seemed to be reading off of a script. ¬†It was clear that she had memorized and was now performing a company sanctioned tour to the letter. “Notice that the backgrounds of the screens our clerics use are white with black lettering instead of the usual black with white lettering. ¬†These new screens are the first step in our advancement toward a more user-friendly interface…”¬† Continue reading

I am a little burnt out!

Let me tell you, writing more than 1600 words every single day (and feeling the pressure of falling behind when you don’t) really gets to you. Especially if, like me, you’re used to writing nothing every day. ¬†I really want to continue my Like Clockwork story but I am having trouble squeezing so many words out of my body. Instead I want to introduce my new blog, where I plan to write about writing and post an excerpt of the first chapter of the novel I’m writing. Think of it as a¬†consolation¬†post.

“The sunset glinted off the knight’s shining armour. Sir Rick Knight of Rotterdam rode away from an explosion without even looking back at it as his faithful steed sprinted across the valley. The local village was alight and its people were scrambling to gather their belongings and loved ones and move away from the flaming maze of cottages before another storehouse filled with the fireworks a chinese ambassidor brought the king just two days ago could explode. The dragon that had caused this mess was already flying away, satisfied with the destuction it had caused, into the mountains of the north. Sir Knight followed with great speed and promised to bring justice to said dragon and prevent it from ever again causing harm. The wind whistled through the slots in his helmet and stung his eyes but still he kept following the path of the dragon. Finally he reached a hill that climbed out of the valley. As he reached its peak and looked out over the land he realized that it would be a great journey to cover the distance that the dragon had already put between them in less than thirty minutes.

‘In the distance he saw a small clloud of smoke rising from a clearing in the dense forest not far ahead of him. He knew that his only chance of reaching the dragon would be with preparation and supplies. His horse also seeing the forest ahead slowed to a stop and whinnied. It was actually more like a whine than a whinny, he did not want to go in that forrest. “Shhhh, it’ll be alright, Steve,” said Sir Knight but Steve could sense danger lurking that the knight could not. So reluctant was the good stead, Steve, that Sir Knight had to get off of his horse and lead him into the forest on foot. Gingerly the two approached the forest entrance. A breeze seemed to escape from inside the tightly packed groves of trees as they were only feet away from walking onto the small dark path that had been cut through.”

Chapter 1- Thine Good Knight on a Daring Quest in Medieval Times with Magic and Probably Dragons and Also  a Princess!

Notes: My new blog is called An Act of Optimism and you can find it at writingoptimist.blogspot.com

I plan on editing my novel so it isn’t so poorly written but for now, this is what I’ve got, this is what I’ve been working on.

I haven’t totally given up on Like Clockwork¬†but I may be posting irregularly until I’m finished with this whole novel writing thing.

Made a new page/ writing a novel in a month!

Hey everybody. I just started Camp NaNoWriMo/ JulNoWriMo today and I’m finally feeling excited about it. I even created a page here¬†to update how its going. The story is a classic¬†medieval¬†fantasy type with a knight and dragons and stuff. The title is really, really long because I kind of came up with the title as I was coming up with the premise of the story (hint: the title IS the premise of the story) I thought, what could be easier and more fun than just writing the prototypical fantasy quest story with abandon? Wish me luck! Here’s hoping I can finish it on time!